Wednesday, February 3, 2016


 
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Helen Hagemann reviews Terra Bravura by Meredith Wattison

When receiving poetry collections for review, I generally research online to find other reviews in order to gauge that particular reader’s response. In this instance I was not disappointed to find several written by most noteworthy academics, including Edric Mesmer from the University of Buffalo USA, and Antonia Pont a Senior Lecturer in Literary Studies and Professional & Creative Writing at Deakin University.  Both writers appraised the work in an in-depth, contemporary and erudite way.  Pont felt obligated as a reviewer to mine the work for its narrative / aesthetic arc and themes, while Mesmer explored its tethering muliebrity. Muliebrity! Wattison’s word in her description of 1950s women. (32)
   While I agree with other reviewers that Terra Bravura is a difficult book to read (perhaps it’s the esoteric phraseology), I tend to explore the poetry from the personal point of view (the lyric ‘I’) often looking for a grassroots, emotional engagement. As I wended my way through its rather dense 140 pages, Wattison’s epilogue on the last page caught my eye. Whether this is a single poem or an addendum to the work, it does not matter. Here is a charitable look at an aging father with dementia that we come to know in this family auto/ biography in verse.

   I show him photographs I have had made from some of his slides. He doesn’t recognise my mother on a beach from their honeymoon, but then the placename brings forward a memory of being there, years earlier, and watching a nudist, wearing only a towel draped around her neck, walk from her cottage every morning down onto the beach for a swim, then she’d walk back. ‘You could set your watch by her,’ he says, grinning.
    Lately he has begun to wake distressed, looking for ‘it’ – ‘Where is it?’ He doesn’t know what ‘it’ is. Only that it is lost.
    Only that it is lost and also there, like a woman walking and melting into the sea, at regular intervals, 60 years ago, and now, with fondness. (136)

   Poets and their fathers have been a major connecting subject in poetry from Seamus Heaney, e e cummings, Robert Bly, Robert Burns, and César Vallejo, to name just a few. Poems about fathers by their poet daughters are even more interesting and Freudian linked. Anne Sexton’s poem ‘Daddy’ Warbucks reveals a subliminal subservience to a powerful father, while Sylvia Plath’s Daddy reveals the father as a vampire and a Nazi who tortures and attacks her individuality. Gale Swiontkowski in her study of Sexton and Plath writes that both poets use the word ‘Daddy’ as opposed to ‘Father’ to show a familiar affection and need, while undermining and challenging the patriarchal and hierarchal structure of ‘Father’ as head of the household. In the Oedipal dilemma, both daughters are ‘compelled to defer their position as victim to escape the subordinate role…as with their enduring mothers.’(27-28). It is through poetry that Sexton and Plath form a controlled and creative response to the affluent and powerful, but destructive and predatory father. (29)
  Wattison’s poetry, although a dense and obscure narrative, nevertheless deals in part with the archetypal relationship of father and daughter. For the purpose of empowering, not victimizing herself, Wattison moves away from confessional poetry towards the symbolic and if not actual, to an equality of father and daughter through the mystical power of poetic language  – ‘I do not tire of this combative bloom….he tilts at the enemy/ I am not it.’ (38-39).

There is a candid nothing of our dynamic.
We are graduating foreground
to a flowering azalea.  (115)
                                      
The father-eating folktale
is a solarised crop
of subject and infinity.   (116)

This time he waves
as I appear through the gate
as though I wouldn’t see him,
a fluttering poplar, standing
in the garage,
Ach, du, Daddy              (119)   after Sylvia Plath’s ‘Daddy’


 
to be continued on Plumwood Mountain.......

Sunday, January 31, 2016


Wednesday, January 27, 2016


The Subject Tonight is Towel

The subject tonight is towel
And from tomorrow night
And days after
Dad has no better topic
For us to discuss
Until we all
Hang up our towel
After showering.


Walls

Some people love walls.
They keep in yelping dogs,
But never cats or birds.
No one sees them talking at night
Yet walls do talk – to each other.
They compare positions, compositions.
Are they stone, cement or brick?
When they need our attention
They crumble for repair.
In winter a storm will blow them over.
Make gaps for geckos and hens.
Can you see the creatures scurrying
Passing two abreast?
Robert Frost loved walls, and said
They make good neighbours
Especially if they talked,
Had one’s garden trimmed,
Kept apple trees to one side
Pine cones to the other.

Do you love walls?

Leaves

There are
So many leaves

Each hangs on a branch
In thousands of different ways
Your eyes will see differences

Infinite shapes: ovoid, needle
Heart-shaped, linear or pencil
You can draw them green in spring
Paint the tree from where they came
Crinkle a gum leaf for its scent

So many leaves
Unfolding and falling
Into your world

Sunday, January 24, 2016



Reinventing The Scream


How agreeable it is to live
under a blue sky.
To watch garden roses budding
and crimping; fragrant hybrids
unfolding their cream/carmine skirts
into a garden system 
of care and sunshine.
How terrible then, an expression on a face,
standing on a bridge, swirl of dark water beneath,
a red sky full of pain. And so many
steadfast hours going into the work
of a silent, yet unsettling scream.
Nothing about Edvard Munch’s scene
will ever change. Yet I want to reinvent
that unhappy face. Lower hands to pockets,
zero in with a pencil-point of smile.
Bridge gone, water gone, a swirl of blue
should enliven Machiavellian thought.
I want the screamer, nosey as a ladybird,
bum up, inhaling an Iceberg rose.
The view should be this urban garden
where rough beds thirst
and a stocky Butcherbird on the tippy
buoyancy of a branch turns,
catching that depressive moment
an instant before the scream.



An Ekphrastic poem inspired by The Scream by Edvard Munch, 1893, Oil, tempera, pastel and crayon on cardboard. Dimensions 91 cm × 73.5 cm (36 in × 28.9 in). Location: National Gallery, Oslo, Norway




Thursday, January 21, 2016


Tuesday, January 12, 2016

Is it the Flowers or Little Bells that are Chiming?

The sound comes up over the roof and travels towards a rear window. In the early morning the noise peals and rips the air like unexpected thunder. Already at four am, the call is heard in the street; the only street that goes from pastured lakes and kangaroos to paths that lead to untended bush land. One wakes to this lively throaty blast, as the cock crows, as a cat mewls, as anything else that is singularly painful. Interval comes. The household returns to sleep thinking about fractured rest as change, just as dawn lightens the dark. Within the hour, a new burst heralds sleeping men, drowsy women. The whole earth summons the shock, and signals the eyelids to prise open, the head heavy with anger that this noise is no different to loud Sunday bells mingled with the irritant clinking of glasses. The body shifts, turns over on a warm spot. What is left of the night opens, shines as a white moon, as white clouds enter the sky. The open air, the grass and the lakes in the distance within and around every bend are finally dawning. In the middle of the street, on the right-hand side, the second house is next to the last and before that a smaller cottage sits amongst a set of three. The awakened family lean their heads to the window, listening. Slippered feet stand beneath a cool basin, the body dresses, walks towards the noisy property where the trees are extremely dry and the grounds are bare. One hopes, like all those familiar companions that talk and agree and are accustomed to the quarrels of people, that civil communication will solve the problem of this constant early morning rooster call. As the din augments into brooding sounds, and cars pass along the main upper road, and no-one knows if it is the flowers or the little bells that are chiming, yet one can feel the crush of thorns underfoot, hear bursts of laughter. In the blazing sun, when the whole landscape is finally awake, and where the trees line a high wall, the neighbour walks with a bird under his arm. And against all the trembling of disagreement, lack of sleep, the differences of one's background, ethnic or religious proclivities, marked opinion or no, a motion is carried, an agreement is reached to keep that squawking, bawking, hen penned.


5th draft
Submitted to Overland Journal: Ben Walter, Editor
Ben writes:
For this special online fiction issue of Overland, I am calling for anti-/dis-/un-Australian stories.
I think, perhaps contentiously, that many Australian short stories suffer from a lack of ambition. They tend to be characterised by a flat, minimalistic realism. The events take place over four, maybe six hours. The relationships between people are not so good – and then they are very meaningful. And people dance on the beach in the middle of the night.
I will be looking to publish stories that embrace a distinctive style or voice, that are not terrified of adornment or a little pizzazz. Wordplay. Humour. Experimental forms, non-linear structures, fragmented sentences, abstractions. Anything, just as long as it doesn’t sound like the winner of a moderately prestigious competition.
I’d be so grateful if you could send stories like this to me.
https://overland.submittable.com/submit/21321

Tilting the Train

Looking at my watch I notice that I have just missed the 5.10 train. Of all days, I am wet through standing on the Summerville platform, the wind howling along the tracks all the way to the coast.  I am alone, except for an old drunk swearing into his tattered mac; most probably his anger rising from an empty swig of a papered bottle.
    5.25pm and my pacing begins. Except now the station is filling with people for the Stirling line. The drunk has disappeared replaced by tired white-collar workers. I walk along the edge, close to the tracks, my head down as I pass the newly arrived commuters. Most have fingers on the pulse of their mobile phones or there’s one guy, a good looking Colin Firth- type, talking to his beloved; throwing his head back now and again, laughing as if he is happy. I imagine him going home to a talk blonde, a woman of impeccable stature and means, re-heating a lamb curry on the stove. Lucky her! Since Marcus left, my meals are made by Weight Watchers. I usually throw the packet in the microwave, sometimes adding some grated cheese or added peas and broccoli. That ABC program Checkout is right, they do look like emaciated meals when they come out. Usually I’m too tired to cook after a long day at Martin Sawyers. Oh yes, the notorious criminal lawyer who represents the bad John Does of this world, especially when they're trying to avoid illuminated cell blocks at night. One of the John Does gives me a wink when he comes into the office. How can that be bad? I don’t mind the attention, the eye-candy.
   Finally the 5.30pm arrives, offloading people for the inner-city car parks or for those heading to the Oxford Street bars and cafes.  My quiet contemplation is interrupted. A woman standing beside me yells and points towards the middle carriage of the train. A man runs to the driver, screaming. Tens of people are milling beside the middle carriage and I can hear the shouting above my earphones.
   I take a few photographs of what is happening. A young man who was ready to leave the train has caught his foot in the gap between the train and platform. He’s just sitting there. There’s panic in the air, and people yelling, ‘Don’t let the train leave!’
   In seconds, the train driver arrives with an assistant. They try to lift the man up from underneath his armpits, but they can’t budge him. The train crew methodically call to several passengers to assist, waving them over and pointing towards the windows of the carriage. A rather tall man is standing next to me, conducting the scene.  ‘I’ve seen this sort of thing before in Singapore,’ he says. ‘Best way is to use soap. Get some soap!’ he shouts.
   ‘I want to know what’s going on. What is he saying?’ I raise my head above the melee of people gathered near the carriage, but see little.
   ‘He’s asking them to stand alongside, to push their weight away from the man, but I can’t see that working.’
   ‘What are they doing now?’
   ‘The driver’s asking everyone to get off.’
   I move away and take more photos. Just as well, the know-all’s constant yelling is beyond favour and subsequently I find a space further along the platform and use my iphone on zoom. This is such an incredible moment. It’s as if there is one combined understanding to free this man. No one is arguing, and with quick decisive action about fifty people including bystanders and rail staff physically rock the train. One of the staff lowers his arm to the count of three, 'One, two, three, push,’ he orders.
   The train tilts and moves from its suspension; manpower force holding it for a few seconds.
   The man frees his leg.
   We all clamber back onto the train.
   We pull away from the platform.
   The tall fellow has further things to say to me as I find one remaining seat.
   ‘I thought it was always a bit of a joke “to mind the gap”, but I think we all will from now on,’ he laughs, leaning into his own reverie.




2nd Draft
Inspiration taken from a true story. 

Monday, January 11, 2016



He is! (Cartoon by http://www.bizarrocomics.com with Harris)

Saturday, December 19, 2015

I had the pleasure of reading a scene from my novel with Tony Curtis. He is such a generous man and gave us not only a reading from his several poetry collections but also entertained the OOTA writers (Fremantle) with his guitar compositions, talks about his family, his working life and all with a wonderful Irish sense of humour.
What a wonderful poet and generous man!

When Sometimes all I can Imagine are Hands
 
There is a winter within me,
a place so cold, so covered in snow,
I rarely go there. But sometimes,
when all I can imagine are hands,
when trees in the forest
look like they’re made of wood,
then I know it’s time
to take my photograph of Akhmatova
and sling it in a bag with socks and scarves.
My neighbours must think it strange
to see me strapping on my snowshoes,
to hear me roar at the huskies
as I untangle the harness.
But when all you can imagine are hands
it’s best to give a little wave
and move out into the whiteness. 






 

Wednesday, December 16, 2015



Friendship
            There are names for what binds us - Jane Hirshfield       

There are days that bind us.
We meet as one, but are many.
When we started out we were younger.
Our nails were stronger, our hair
fell down and dovetailed in to curves
matching a lighter weight.
The way a younger self holds firmer flesh,
small triumphs for tanned skin
baked proudly in the sun.
 
There's a name for the battle scars
doctors burn them from our skin
and as we age, gravity's the fear.

When seven women
meet in friendship over years
there may be wounds, a partner gone,
something proud inside one's chest.
But between us all there's only
the strength we have and we give it.
Then it asks more, and we give it.



4th Draft  Copyright (c) 2015
Lunch with good friends today. It's a ritual to swap gifts, eat wonderful food and talk for five hours. Many thanks to our host Linda.

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Helen Hagemann holds an MA in Writing from Edith Cowan University, has three poetry books: Evangelyne & Other Poems published by Australian Poetry, Melbourne (2009) and of Arc & Shadow published by Sunline Press, Perth (2013). Bounty: prose poetry is published by Oz.one Publishing in 2024. She has three novels published The Last Asbestos Town (2020), The Ozone Café (2021) and The Five Lives of Ms Bennett a result of her Masters degree at ECU (2006), is published by Oz.one Publishing (2023).

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