The Old Man
He wasn't
always old. When young he won his school's one-hundred metre dash in under
three minutes. He rode motor bikes, built model airplanes and lathed and
varnished jarrah tables. That was then. Now his wife had died and his children
were overseas. He knew no one in the convoy of early morning walkers and only
had the company of his shadow when circuiting the park. There were days that
had little strength, a few dog owners drifting past, nodding, some crooning
about Pippa or Bluey, others less impassioned about the weather. When they were
gone there was nothing more to add. It would have been easier just to ring an
empty bell. At night he watched TV, its flashes of coloured light and noise
livening up the room. He watched one program and had the idea to visit his
local tavern.
The main bar was dark and musty, mostly men
his age seated on stools. On Friday nights he went along hoping to meet a new
friend, but one regular, who had previously spoken, continued to crouch over
his beer, the glass propping up the sadness in his face.
Come
this Saturday, the bartender said. We
get a good crowd and usually a country music band. You'll have fun.
The night wasn’t what he expected, and it brought
a change to his face. A younger crowd greeted him. Handshakes and shoulders
touched like a bridge. And like a crossing, he encountered the simplicity of
conversation over a round of beers. He noticed, above the hubbub of music,
laughter and voices, all the young men sported beards. They were impressive,
neat and tidy, colourful and not at all housing breakfast crumbs, toothpaste or
foreign bodies.
It's the new rage, said one fellow. Why not grow one
and join the club?
He went along every Saturday night. Why
hadn't he thought of wearing a beard before? In all his eighty years he had
lathered and shaved, rinsed and patted.
Overnight the hairs inched forward beginning
as little brown wisps. He looked like Benjamin Disraeli. When it had grown and
bushed out he resembled Sir John Forrest. On days when it grew long and unkempt
he was Gandalf.
The young men invited him to car trials,
quiz nights, beard contests, and to zero birthdays. Mostly, it was a thirtieth
or fortieth and the talk revolved around shapes, styles and colour. There was
the Johnny Depp, the David Beckham, the Santa Claus, the goatee, the
short-boxed and the stubble. His head heard words like 'soul patch, terminal
and mouche'. The men told him about a city barber where he could have his beard
trimmed and coloured, but if he couldn't afford that, there was the beard
trimmer at K-Mart.
Each morning as he splashed water on his
face, he gazed at himself in the bathroom mirror. He was not a bristled Anthony
Hopkins, but staring back between a neatly trimmed moustache and Silverfox
beard, a smile formed.
4 comments:
A good start - love the smile...
Yes, think you have picked up on the generosity of the younger generation. Also that people often box themselves while other people are often more giving than what is expected. There is a glitch with the black hair of his beard growing - probably not black when he is in his 80s. Thanks for sharing - inspiration. I also need to get back in to the swing of things this year. Sandra
Thanks Frances and thanks for reading this.
Thanks for your comments. Yes, perhaps not black, so changed it to brown. Some men can have grey hair, or even be bald, and when a beard grows it can be dark or red!! I tried to show at the end that he had a salt & pepper beard & mo, as that is what a Silverfox is. I got the inspiration from a article on TV about men now wearing beards. It's amazing where stories come from. Best wishes with your writing. Cheers, Helen
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